Hey Kyle, You did an excellent job on your first elevator pitch. I was thoroughly intrigued throughout its entirety. You did a fantastic job on pitching your business idea and really caught my attention. Your pitch was delivered very professionally, such as your mannerism, deliverance, and the way you were dressed. I am very interested in learning more about your business idea. It seems like it can be very effective and efficient in the real world.
Hello Kyle, I thought you did a brilliant video in your first elevator pitch. You caught my attention from the beginning to the idea and opportunity and very much enjoyed your tone, vocabulary and overall speech time and pace. I also thought you did a great job in body language by not letting it detract from the message your were telling.
Hey Kyle, First of all, GREAT JOB on your elevator speech. In order to be as helpful as positive, I'm going to focus on constructive feedback. I did notice you pacing left and right and rubbing your hands together which may distract your audience. I think everything you said was great, but the delivery could sound a little more confident (your idea is great, so be confident about it!) Finally, the only other comment is to watch for time because it went a little longer. This peer review was obviously focused on things you could improve, but overall I actually think there is little to improve because you did a great job, congrats!
Hey Kyle,
ReplyDeleteYou did an excellent job on your first elevator pitch. I was thoroughly intrigued throughout its entirety. You did a fantastic job on pitching your business idea and really caught my attention. Your pitch was delivered very professionally, such as your mannerism, deliverance, and the way you were dressed. I am very interested in learning more about your business idea. It seems like it can be very effective and efficient in the real world.
Hello Kyle,
ReplyDeleteI thought you did a brilliant video in your first elevator pitch. You caught my attention from the beginning to the idea and opportunity and very much enjoyed your tone, vocabulary and overall speech time and pace. I also thought you did a great job in body language by not letting it detract from the message your were telling.
Hey Kyle,
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, GREAT JOB on your elevator speech. In order to be as helpful as positive, I'm going to focus on constructive feedback. I did notice you pacing left and right and rubbing your hands together which may distract your audience. I think everything you said was great, but the delivery could sound a little more confident (your idea is great, so be confident about it!) Finally, the only other comment is to watch for time because it went a little longer. This peer review was obviously focused on things you could improve, but overall I actually think there is little to improve because you did a great job, congrats!