2) I appreciate all the good feedback I got on my last version of the video, especially those that liked the story I started out with.
3) I got really good feedback on the last take of the Elevator Pitch, so I didn't decide to change anything of the script. I did, however, do a little more practicing, which I believe helped me deliver the pitch smoother (though only like 4 seconds faster, so still a little over time). Hopefully I'm right in that it came out a little better, but if not, I still hope yall will lie to me and say it did.
Hey Kyle,
ReplyDeleteAfter viewing all three of your elevator pitches, I believe your third one is the best one for you. It is evident that you carefully took the feedback your peers had given you and successfully adapted that into your speeches. You should be really proud of yourself for improving your delivery skills in these pitches. It may seem intimidating at first, but once you do it a few times, it comes natural and effortlessly as it shows in your progress. Once again, great job on your pitch!
Hello Kyle,
ReplyDeleteAs the saying goes, the third time is the charm. After receiving feedback from all three of your pitches you were able to really improve your elevator pitch. Overall the pitch did sound smoother and more cohesive as a whole with is the final tweaks to any pitch, ironing out the edges. I believe you succeeded at that and it is why this pitch is your best. Great job on the hard work and this pitch in particular!
Hey Kyle,
ReplyDeleteI thoroughly enjoyed your pitch and I believe you really improved on the pace and structure of your pitch. I still really enjoyed the story even after listening to it a second time and genuinely enjoyed the entirety of your pitch as it was very interesting to hear your idea and how you believe it would solve a problem. Great work!